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Post by phoenix on Aug 2, 2019 20:35:53 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Aug 2, 2019 21:16:38 GMT -5
Your narratives are succinct and present a wide variety of topics. One improvement could be set design, or more, take advantage of your stage. Just be more fluid with surroundings.
The voice, character and tone all match and help tell a nice double-edged story. I like what's coming out of Haven, and I can't wait to read more from y'all.
- P
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